Sorry for not coming to class on Tues., I was sick had no energy to move, do your homework/workbook and do not forget the question you are supposed to turn in! See ya, Hanieh 19 May, 2011
Hi :) (Hanieh)
Hi:) (kamand) OMG!!!:)) Kamaand! I can't believe it! How fast you came and had your comment!! Start writing your paragraph! Come on! and tell your friends to come and write in here too!! (Hanieh)! hello:)(elika) Hi (Matin) When I was a child my parents make me drink milk every night. They didn't let me go out after bathroom.(OMG) I was forced to clean my bed in the morning. ===>in the morning I wasn't allowed to go out with my friends.==> with I was supposed to do some sport every day. They let me make brakefast for them.They are my parents and I know they did those for me(their lovely child). OK. enough for now. bye Matin
Hey guys:D so happy to see you all here! Elika, Matin thanks! Elika dear where is your paragraph...
guys by the way you can register in this page so you don't need to type your name in paranthesis, I would understand who has written it from the "recent changes"!
Thank you Matin, but not enough!!! I didn't say some sentences! I said a "paragraph":)!
By the way you write your names with CAPITAL letters!!! Don't forget!(Hanieh) Dear Hanieh Thanks a lot. OK I will think and will wright(------>> write) more tomorrow . hi.....(parichehr) =Parichehr becareful about your mistakes dear, thanks. When i was a child my parents make me say hello to my grand father.... They let me go to bed late....... I supoosed to cut my hair ...... ===>>what do you mean Parichehr? I was supposed to cut my hair is right. I was forced do not say bad things.... ==> I was forced not to say bad things. I allowed go to my neighbours house in the evening......=====> I was allowed to go to....... just it.BYE
Thank you Parichehr! Please read previous notes as well! There are some points you have to consider! Matin thanks! Looking forward to reading your complete paragraph! Parichehr I said a paragraph not just sentences!!!!!! Thank you guys!(Hanieh)
hi(farangis)
when i was a child my parents make me sing for them.
and they let me dance in front of the others.just to make them laugh and for fun of it. ==>for THE fun of it
i was forced to go toilet alone at night.the work which i afraid of it. ==> to go to toilet
i was allowed to touch dangerous things in home such as hot iron.==> at home
i was supposed to go to bathroom every they which i hated alot. ==> every day
it was an imaginary writing
Hi.This is my imaginary paragraph:
When i was a child my parents make me scare myself with vampire's mask to made ===>>> to make them happy.They let me play football with boys and after each match i injured ====> I was injured so badly.I was forced to shine their shoes every day,specially my brother forced me to do it for him,because he had dates with his girl friends.( :)) how many girl friends:)))!!!!!) I was allowed to go on trips alone because they thought i could do everything by myself.And i was supposed to wash the toilet everyday because my brother and mother's friends came to our house everyday.
BYE.ELIKA
hi.when I was a child my parents make me say a prayer because they thought that was necessary for me.They let me go to my friend`s home and play with them until night.I was forced to wear a scarf because they believed I was a big girl( I was a grown up girl).I was allowed to sleep with my parents because I had some baddreams===> nightmares.I was supposed to go===> to bathroom bathroom and cut my nails twice a week.BYE.Leila zakihi...*MARJAN JO0O0O0O0On*When I was a child my parents make me to go===> go not to go!!! to toilette before I go to bed. They let me go to===>>> go out not to go out! out for( to play is right) play with other children.I was forced to not speak ====> not to speakwith rude children and say bad words.I was allowed to sleep when ever I want.I was suppose to brush my tooth before I sleep.(excuse me that I write it late.)My parents allowed me to stay in some of my friend's house for sleep at night (to sleep at night) , or I could stay out with my nighbour's child until 8. When I was 12 (less or more!)=====> more or less not less or more! they let me go on holiday with my friends. We went to Mashhad or Esfehan every summer. But there were annoying rules too !I had to sleep at 9. I had to pee before sleep or going out (it was the worse thing ever). They just let me to go===> they let me go not to go! let+ base formto some of my friend birthday party that they know them.Thats why I think they are in the middle (not easy-going & not strict)."Ghazal"Thank you so much guys! I am so very proud of you all!! Farangis, Elika, Leila , Marjan and Ghazal very nice job!!! Thanks!Please remember to be a member of this page so that you won't have problem of writing your names in here!Well done!(Hanieh-tchr) When I was a child my parents make me clean my room and arrange my clothes. They let me ride bike to alley in the evening. I was forced to ask my parents aboat playing with my friends. I wasnot allowed to play with other children in our alley.but sometimes I didnot pay attention to them and, I played with those children. I was supposed to be in house which time my parents said. / mona
Thank you Mona no mistakes!
Hi.........(Anita) when i was a child i had a normal family. my mother was very kind with===> to me not with me me.she said I am like your friend you should say every thing to me because I can help you.she allowed me to stay out late at night if she knew that where I am?I always had to tell my parents where I were ==>>>was going I always did my home worklate at night.my parents make me help about the house like(I cleaned my room,washed the dishes&...)my mother went to work and I shoud look after my sister
I'm first ! "Ghazal" no i am first anita so we are first. hi guys(hanieh) anybody online? Bad guys'right?'Ghazal" Hey Ghazal..I AM GONNA FAIL ALL OF THEM EXCEPT FOR YOU AND ANITA!!!...they say they will come and they don't!! It is not fair! they are so very aloof! (Hanieh) :) Ghazal dear I am so depressed now,... gonna go..sweetie thanks for being honest and on time, I'll consider this as your class work! Enjoy yourself, good night and sweet dreams, goona leave here now! but good for me I know to who you can trust in that class!! Shame on them! (Hanieh Akbarimehr)hi teacher i am here too anita
Hi Anita...I understood...:) ..please pray for my tomorrow interview:( I am so very sad now... and stressed...dear thanks for coming! Thanks to both of you:)... Take care. Good night.
hiiiii (Matin.A)
im here too....but a bit late ,sorry....I couldnt come sooner,,,,I hope that u see mine too...and i hope that you will be successful in this interview...
hi.Elika
sorry i come too late.I'll have an exam so i had to study.I wish you see this and i pray for your interview.Again sorry for come late:(
Hi Matin and Elika....Thanks for coming, although it was late, I totally accept it!!:) torokhoda doa konin bachehaaa....bidaram daram mikosham khodamo sar o samoon midam fard achi begam...please please for God sake pray for me! Love, Hanieh. Hi everybody I am Matin.h. I am so sorry for last night but I told u I can't come. see u tomorrow. Hanieh dear, I'll pray for u. Hi Guys:)! Thank you all! My interview was AWESOME!! I just can't believe how well it went! Thank you all! Looking forward to seeing your completed writings! (Hanieh-Akbarimehr) :D ( Ghazal (Hanieh -Akbarimehr) Hi all, I am gonna write some of your mistakes, check your writings again please. Note this "color"!:) Your mistakes in each part is corrected by "=====>>>>" and then teh correct word! Thanks for your cooperation. Good luck. (Kamand) when I was a child my parents allowed me to play football with other children in the street. they didn't make me to do any thing. They let me to sleep late at night. I had to go to kindergarten. They let me whatch T.V as much as I wanted. They didn't allow me go out after bathroom. I had to do my homework every dar after school.... I don't know any thing more.....
Hi guys; what's up? what did you do last tuesday? let me know ! thanks.(Matin)
Hey there,
Sorry for not coming to class on Tues., I was sick had no energy to move, do your homework/workbook and do not forget the question you are supposed to turn in! See ya, Hanieh 19 May, 2011
Hi :) (Hanieh)
Hi:) (kamand)
OMG!!!:)) Kamaand! I can't believe it! How fast you came and had your comment!! Start writing your paragraph! Come on! and tell your friends to come and write in here too!! (Hanieh)!
hello:)(elika)
Hi (Matin)
When I was a child my parents make me drink milk every night.
They didn't let me go out after bathroom.(OMG)
I was forced to clean my bed in the morning. ===>in the morning
I wasn't allowed to go out with my friends.==> with
I was supposed to do some sport every day. They let me make brakefast for them.They are my parents and I know they did those for me(their lovely child).
OK. enough for now. bye
Matin
Hey guys:D so happy to see you all here! Elika, Matin thanks! Elika dear where is your paragraph...
guys by the way you can register in this page so you don't need to type your name in paranthesis, I would understand who has written it from the "recent changes"!
Thank you Matin, but not enough!!! I didn't say some sentences! I said a "paragraph":)!
By the way you write your names with CAPITAL letters!!! Don't forget!(Hanieh)
Dear Hanieh
Thanks a lot. OK I will think and will wright(------>> write) more tomorrow .
hi.....(parichehr) =Parichehr becareful about your mistakes dear, thanks.
When i was a child my parents make me say hello to my grand father....
They let me go to bed late.......
I supoosed to cut my hair ...... ===>>what do you mean Parichehr? I was supposed to cut my hair is right.
I was forced do not say bad things.... ==> I was forced not to say bad things.
I allowed go to my neighbours house in the evening......=====> I was allowed to go to.......
just it.BYE
Thank you Parichehr! Please read previous notes as well! There are some points you have to consider! Matin thanks! Looking forward to reading your complete paragraph! Parichehr I said a paragraph not just sentences!!!!!!
Thank you guys!(Hanieh)
hi(farangis)
when i was a child my parents make me sing for them.
and they let me dance in front of the others.just to make them laugh and for fun of it. ==>for THE fun of it
i was forced to go toilet alone at night.the work which i afraid of it. ==> to go to toilet
i was allowed to touch dangerous things in home such as hot iron.==> at home
i was supposed to go to bathroom every they which i hated alot. ==> every day
it was an imaginary writing
Hi.This is my imaginary paragraph:
When i was a child my parents make me scare myself with vampire's mask to made ===>>> to make them happy.They let me play football with boys and after each match i injured ====> I was injured so badly.I was forced to shine their shoes every day,specially my brother forced me to do it for him,because he had dates with his girl friends.( :)) how many girl friends:)))!!!!!) I was allowed to go on trips alone because they thought i could do everything by myself.And i was supposed to wash the toilet everyday because my brother and mother's friends came to our house everyday.
BYE.ELIKA
hi.when I was a child my parents make me say a prayer because they thought that was necessary for me.They let me go to my friend`s home and play with them until
night.I was forced to wear a scarf because they believed I was a big girl( I was a grown up girl).I was allowed to sleep with my parents because I had some baddreams===> nightmares.I was supposed to go===> to bathroom bathroom and cut my nails twice a week.BYE.Leila zakihi...*MARJAN JO0O0O0O0On*When I was a child my parents make me to go===> go not to go!!! to toilette before I go to bed. They let me go to===>>> go out not to go out! out for( to play is right) play with other children.I was forced to not speak ====> not to speakwith rude children and say bad words.I was allowed to sleep when ever I want.I was suppose to brush my tooth before I sleep.(excuse me that I write it late.)My parents allowed me to stay in some of my friend's house for sleep at night (to sleep at night) , or I could stay out with my nighbour's child until 8. When I was 12 (less or more!)=====> more or less not less or more! they let me go on holiday with my friends. We went to Mashhad or Esfehan every summer. But there were annoying rules too !I had to sleep at 9. I had to pee before sleep or going out (it was the worse thing ever). They just let me to go===> they let me go not to go! let+ base formto some of my friend birthday party that they know them.Thats why I think they are in the middle (not easy-going & not strict)."Ghazal"Thank you so much guys! I am so very proud of you all!! Farangis, Elika, Leila , Marjan and Ghazal very nice job!!! Thanks!Please remember to be a member of this page so that you won't have problem of writing your names in here!Well done!(Hanieh-tchr)
When I was a child my parents make me clean my room and arrange my clothes.
They let me ride bike to alley in the evening.
I was forced to ask my parents aboat playing with my friends.
I wasnot allowed to play with other children in our alley.but sometimes I didnot pay attention to them and, I played with those children.
I was supposed to be in house which time my parents said. / mona
Thank you Mona no mistakes!
Hi.........(Anita)
when i was a child i had a normal family. my mother was very kind with===> to me not with me me.she said I am like your friend you should say every thing to me because I can help you.she allowed me to stay out late at night if she knew that where I am?I always had to tell my parents where I were ==>>>was going I always did my home worklate at night.my parents make me help about the house like(I cleaned my room,washed the dishes&...)my mother went to work and I shoud look after my sister
I'm first !
"Ghazal" no i am first anita
so we are first.
hi guys(hanieh)
anybody online?
Bad guys'right?'Ghazal"
Hey Ghazal..I AM GONNA FAIL ALL OF THEM EXCEPT FOR YOU AND ANITA!!!...they say they will come and they don't!! It is not fair! they are so very aloof! (Hanieh)
:) Ghazal dear I am so depressed now,... gonna go..sweetie thanks for being honest and on time, I'll consider this as your class work! Enjoy yourself, good night and sweet dreams, goona leave here now! but good for me I know to who you can trust in that class!! Shame on them! (Hanieh Akbarimehr)hi teacher i am here too anita
Hi Anita...I understood...:) ..please pray for my tomorrow interview:( I am so very sad now... and stressed...dear thanks for coming! Thanks to both of you:)... Take care. Good night.
hiiiii (Matin.A)
im here too....but a bit late ,sorry....I couldnt come sooner,,,,I hope that u see mine too...and i hope that you will be successful in this interview...
hi.Elika
sorry i come too late.I'll have an exam so i had to study.I wish you see this and i pray for your interview.Again sorry for come late:(Hi Matin and Elika....Thanks for coming, although it was late, I totally accept it!!:)
torokhoda doa konin bachehaaa....bidaram daram mikosham khodamo sar o samoon midam fard achi begam...please please for God sake pray for me! Love, Hanieh.
Hi everybody
I am Matin.h. I am so sorry for last night but I told u I can't come. see u tomorrow. Hanieh dear, I'll pray for u.
Hi Guys:)! Thank you all! My interview was AWESOME!! I just can't believe how well it went! Thank you all! Looking forward to seeing your completed writings! (Hanieh-Akbarimehr)
:D (
Ghazal
(Hanieh -Akbarimehr)
Hi all, I am gonna write some of your mistakes, check your writings again please. Note this "color"!:)
Your mistakes in each part is corrected by "=====>>>>" and then teh correct word!
Thanks for your cooperation. Good luck.
(Kamand) when I was a child my parents allowed me to play football with other children in the street.
they didn't make me to do any thing. They let me to sleep late at night. I had to go to kindergarten.
They let me whatch T.V as much as I wanted. They didn't allow me go out after bathroom.
I had to do my homework every dar after school.... I don't know any thing more.....
Hi guys; what's up? what did you do last tuesday? let me know ! thanks.(Matin)